Adventures In Writing And Reading, Part 3
After writing Parts One and Two in quick succession I may have slacked slightly, but here we go with Part Three! And this time I want to fulfil the mandate set out in the title a little more accurately and write a bit about Writing as well as Reading. So, I’m going to try and consider, a) how the stories I have picked out have affected my writing, and b) the function of a writing community in encouraging and improving the work of those in it. But, really, it’s still just going to be me rambling on about short stories for as long as you can be bothered to read, ok? Good.
ROBERT SHEARMAN: ‘Luxembourg’ from Love Songs For The Shy And Cynical
I’ll start with Robert Shearman because he’s a really good writer and he has a new book out, though the story I’m going to write about is not from his new one because I haven’t bought it yet. Love Songs For The Shy And Cynical is Shearman’s second themed collection of odd little stories following Tiny Deaths. He writes strange stories which have one foot in Science Fiction as he invents odd impossibilities and shows how they affect individual’s everyday lives.
For example, in his story ‘Luxembourg,’ the whole country inexplicably disappears one day, taking with it the protaganist’s husband who is on a business trip. The story unfolds as the protaganist calmly accepts the news and resolves to not make a fuss. The way in which the disappearance of Luxembourg is handled – as if it were the most normal thing in the world and barely worth mentioning – is indicative of the way Shearman treats his narratives. No fuss, no drama, the tale inches forward in quietly compelling ways.
He takes absurd notions and then follows the logic of what happens next. And I think this is why I like short stories and why I like writing short stories. I think ideas are important and I like stories that ask ‘What if?’ and ‘What happens next?’ These are questions to kick an imagination into action. So I like that Robert Shearman asks, ‘What would happen if Luxembourg disappeared one day?’ and then asks ‘What would happen next?’ Perhaps the key is finding interesting questions like this to tempt the reader in, and then supplying interesting answers so that what is left is not just a neat idea but a good story.
Anyway, I can thoroughly recommend Rob Shearman, who does this stuff way better than I do.
A.C. TILLYER: ‘J Is For Job Centre’ from An A to Z of Possible Worlds
From independent publishing house Roast Books comes this lovely collection of surreal short stories from AC Tillyer, twenty six tales set in twenty six different locations. Firstly I must mention the presentation of this set – twenty six beautifully printed little books packaged into a small box which suggests the compilation of a universe just as each story revolves around a different Possible World.
And the theme is not just a handy umbrella – these modern fables are powered by places and ideas. There are few readily identifiable characters throughout and Tillyer seems to be more interested in group mentality than tales of individual deeds. The places are all fictional, though described as Possible rather than Imagined which hints at the way in which Tillyer uses these set-pieces to satirise and explore the real world. These are tales full of exposed dictators, ridiculous government bureaucracy and pricked pomp and circumstance as well as gentle philosophising.
In ‘Job Centre’ we see what happens when a government announces that there is no unemployment, news which takes by surprise both those working at and those attending the job centre. Tillyer works through the logical repercussions and then sets to work finding a solution.
What I like about these stories, and what I hope to try and achieve with my own storywriting, is that they are full of ideas, sometimes strange, surreal ideas which nevertheless stitch themselves to the fabric of everyday life in order to try and make sense of it all. I also like the timelessness of these stories, the lack of detail and the suggestion that all the little people scurrying around these tales are cogs and wheels in some bigger plan. They could be anybody and anywhen, and what emerges is a poignant study of human nature. Or something. Next!
Actually, before I move on I should mention the presentation of these stories again because as regards my own work it is something of which I like to be in control and have some fun with. I like devising different ways to publish things – whether it is printing short stories onto envelopes or publishing poems in tiny hand-bound books – and I like it when other writers do the same. I’m sure that it would have been far easier for Roast Books to publish these stories as a single bound book but instead they chose the more difficult option of publishing them separately and housing them in a box. And that makes me happy. Apart from the aesthetics of it, this is also useful as the reader can take the stories out individually – when I first read this collection I took one book to work with me each day and read it while I ate my lunch. I do not know whether the format was the author’s idea or the publisher’s but I think it is important for writers to have ideas – and even a hands-on approach – as regards the presentation of their work.
Finally, before I move on, I should say thank you to Rach for finding out about these books and giving me them as a present. Thanks!
Now – next!
DAN PURDUE: ‘A Night In With Zil’ from Somewhere To Start From
A few months ago I attended a Sudden Fiction workshop at the library as part of the Guernsey Literary Festival (actually I think it was May… never let it be said I am prompt in writing up my adventures). This was a break from my usual isolationist way of doing things but it is rare to hear of an event revolving around Sudden Fiction – and it meant I got to be in the library on a Sunday! Events like this remind me somewhat of writing workshops at University, everyone sitting around and writing at the same time and then feeding back with the work they have done. Writing on demand is an interesting way of working and, although it took me a while to get going, I did come up with a short story with which I was quite pleased. It was also good to meet some more writery types in Guernsey.
Leading the workshop was Dan Purdue, a writer from the mainland whose writing blog, which also links to some of his published work, can be read here. I found his talk really interesting because he is a writer still trying to establish himself in the literary world – he has had some success in competitions and has just put together a collection of stories – and it was good to hear from someone in that position. He did a good job of introducing Sudden Fiction to those attending and spoke about editing stories down to their core ideas to create pieces of sudden fiction, before setting everyone off to do some work.
So, I thought that I would review one of the short stories in his collection. A Night In With Zil is one of Dan’s prize-winning shorts and imagines a house share between Godzilla and King Kong. He uses the comedy of the situation well, exploring the dysfunctional relationship between the two monsters as they share a flat and try to integrate themselves into society, resisting the temptation to crush buildings, eat people, etc. Using existing well-known characters in a short story is a good way of solving the problem of how to build up good characters in a short space of time. However, I think this only really works if you bring something different to the characters – such as putting them in a new situation as Dan does here.
Obviously the comedy of the situation (situation comedy?… I suppose it is a sit-com of sorts, a bit like Men Behaving Badly with Godzilla and King Kong in the starring roles) is a key part of the story, but this also a story about fitting in and putting the past behind you and evolves from being a comedy set-piece into a poignant tale.
I have also enjoyed reading Dan’s blog which he uses to discuss writing rather than to publish his work. He reports on competitions he is submitting entries to, on his successes and writes about his productivity and about confidence, various authorly pitfalls and the avoidance thereof. It’s not so much about passing on technical tips and giving advice, more about expressing the kind of doubts that I think all writers have as they go about their work – the nagging feeling that any worth the author may see in what they have done is all in their head, the worry that the original idea you think you’ve had is actually an unconscious steal from someone else, etc, etc. Writing is a solitary exercise and I think sharing experiences and forming networks provide support is important, seeing someone else share these thoughts provides a lot of comfort and lets you know you are on the right track, or at least not necessarily on completely the wrong one. My favourite of Dan’s posts was probably this rather positive missive about how we should all have more confidence in ourselves.
And as a demonstration of how these networks are a good way to find new and interesting writers, I found some great stories by Teresa Stanton, a writer of Dan’s acquantaince, from reading his blog. I liked her story ‘Things Which Are Not True’ which was recently included in the Guardian’s Summer Short Story Special, but I thought the other story on her website, ‘Ball Wall,’ was even better – simple, funny, effective, neatly capturing childlike imagination and the group mentality of the school class.
Next Time – Part 4! Stand by for more hot Sudden Fiction chat as I hand-pick some of my favourites from the genre-defining collection ‘Sudden Fiction International’ and asking, what good is a really short story when everything else seems to go on forever?
2 thoughts on “Day #10024”
Thanks for the mention, Ric. I’ve said it before, but I’m really pleased you enjoyed the workshop and impressed that you put together such a great little story in the limited time that was available.
I must get myself a copy of Sudden Fiction International – it looked very interesting. It’s on my to-buy list!
It’s great that you like Teresa’s work as well – she’s got some excellent work out there and masses more to come, I’m sure.
I’m really pleased you like the stories you mention, especially ‘Ballwall’ which was one of the first pieces of fiction I wrote that felt like ‘me’. Thanks so much for you support. Good luck in your own writing endeavours – I like your term ‘pen monkey’.